Starting Count: 58223
\nEnding Count: 60712
\nNet Gain: + 2489<\/p>\n
Starting line:<\/b>
\nThe tall black nurse stepped into the room, her flawless face concerned, her dark eyes shadowed until she saw him turn. <\/p>\n
Ending line:<\/b>
\n\u201cBecause I can\u2019t help you,\u201d she said, and then the golden glows faded, and both she and Caran vanished.<\/p>\n
Darling:<\/b>
\nThom and Caran both turned in time to see Domyelle slam into the glass, her beautiful face contorted in fear and pain. Red blood fountained up from somewhere behind her, splashing the walls, and she slid down slowly, one hand clawing at the window in mute supplication. As she fell, Thom heard the screams that the monitors had masked, and then he felt it.<\/p>\n
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\n60k! Finally! And lots of mayhem, etc. We’re moving into the climax, which makes me happy. It’s a rough draft, but there’s a lot of good in it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
Starting Count: 58223 Ending Count: 60712 Net Gain: + 2489 Starting line: The tall black nurse stepped into the room, her flawless face concerned, her dark eyes shadowed until she saw him turn. Ending line: \u201cBecause I can\u2019t help you,\u201d she said, and then the golden glows faded, and both she and Caran vanished. Darling: …<\/p>\n