October 27th, 2011
(metrics) Take 2, start of novella
Starting Count: 0
Ending Count: 637
New Words: 637
Opening Line:
How did I get myself into these situations?
Ending Line:
We ended up in the middle of the road, sideways, like a cop car doing a roadblock.
Darling:
Andrew, with his lopsided smile and short dark curls, longer than his father the head of the law firm approved of, just long enough to tangle my fingers in. Andrew, whose long fingers teased the softest notes from his violin, but who couldn’t sing to save his life. Andrew, who refused to let me keep him at arm’s length, dammit.
Unnamed novella. Ghosthunters. Sort of.
Awesome snippets.
Love the change of tone in the last sentence of the “darling”. =D
Thanks, Janice and Alba! I’m really happy with the way the new novella is working out.